“That’s it.” Bea nodded her head toward the gray block building.
“That’s the Med-Lab? It looks deserted.”
“Most of the staff go to and from using a tunnel system.”
Mac studied the windows, but watching for signs of movement was impossible through the opaque glass. “Do you remember when they change shifts?”
“No. All the rooms are pretty much soundproof. You don’t know who is where or when until they come in to get you.”
The sun dipped behind white puffy clouds. Mac’s ears perked at distant rumble of engines. “Maybe we caught a break.”
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Intriguing excerpt. Are they after drugs? Need help? Have more sinister intentions? Many possiblities.
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No knowing what they are doing there or why fills me with curiosity.
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I’m worried it’s not a break at all!
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It’s the part about not knowing who is where or when that caught my attention. I’m wondering if there is time travel going on behind those walls.
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Dear Sara,
Good descriptions and concise writing. However I have to ask who Bea and Mac are and what is their interest in the Med-Lab?
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I was intrigued, but as an excerpt I really had no clue what was going on and whether Bea and Mac were saboteurs or lab rats
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