Friday Fictioneers: Cold Storage


Cold Storage

The high-pitched squeak of the loose wheel echoes down the hallway. Light bounces off the metal walls. Polished floors gleam beneath our feet.

Lou stops. She holds up her fist.

I pull on the metal rail and throw my weight back. The loaded cart groans in protest, but stops.

Seconds tick by. Lou’s ponytail flips right, then left. Sweat trickles down my back.

Without looking back, she waves us forward. It takes all my force to get the cart moving again. The wheel resumes its shrill tune.

We’re almost at cold storage.

Get it in. Lock up. Then walk away.


Photo prompt & featured image: © Amy Reese

Friday Fictioneers is a weekly challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The above is my 100-word fictional story. Each week, writers are offered a photo prompt, from which we are challenged to write a complete story, in 100  words or less. Then we post, share, comment and critique with dozens of other writers. Click the blue frog button to find more stories, and join in!

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