Hiding in Plain Sight
Fiction; 100 words
Xalba crouched on the branch and watched the courtyard. She rubbed her arm where Shem grabbed it to drag her away from the armed guards. The clouded leopard perched on a limb above her, his eyes focused and tail flicking back and forth.
Her father, at least, the man she had thought was her father, paced along the pond and barked orders. Guards to the hills, around the village, into the jungle.
Several passed under them, scanning the jungle floor and low brush for a trail, oblivious to the pair hiding above. The dense foliage provided perfect cover.
For now.
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Photo prompt & featured image: © CEAyr
Friday Fictioneers is a weekly challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The above is my 100-word fictional story. Each week, writers are offered a photo prompt, from which we are challenged to write a complete story, in 100 words or less. Then we post, share, comment and critique with dozens of other writers. Click the blue frog button to find more stories, and join in!
Happy trails!
Ooh I wonder what happened before! How come she thought he was her father? Very intriguing tale!
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Hi, Felicia! Thanks for reading and your comments! He raised her as his own, not knowing she was the daughter of another for years…story under construction! I hope you’ll check back on her another time!
Happy trails! 🙂
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Sounds great! I can’t wait and I’ll be sure to check back 😉
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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Very intriguing and promising.
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Thanks!
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There is so much in this story. I hope she makes it. Well done.
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Thanks! Ah, there’s so much ahead for Xalba…she’ll be back! 🙂
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This sounds like my kind of story, Shem and a clouded leopard. Tick
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Morning and thanks, Michael! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and leaving those kind words. 🙂
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wow, the thing you could do in 100 words.
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Thanks! Very kind words to start my day! 🙂
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Dear Sara.
Intriguing story. You literally left the reader up a tree. Nicely done .
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Greetings, Rochelle!
Thanks. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. Xalba is a character for whom I have big plans. This week was a great prompt for me to flesh out a little of her early years.
In case you a celebrating and fasting tomorrow, G’mar Tov! 🙂
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Good descriptive writing
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Thanks, Neil!
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very well written!
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Thanks! Glad you read and enjoyed it. 🙂
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